Ok, I shrilled you guys enough with the crazy version. I smoothed out the base.
New Composition
Photo courtesy Freebird at flickr.com.
New Composition
Photo courtesy Freebird at flickr.com.
Thursday, November 30, 2017
Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Tuesday, November 28, 2017
"You Have the Wrong Girl" #newsong #lorijean #saysitall
New Song I'm working on that says it all.
You Have the Wrong Girl
By 'Lori Jean' Finnila
Humble turns to confusion
Sweet smiles become allusions
Chorus
It's your fantasy
Not me
You have the wrong girl
I was just passing by
Verse
When you noticed
I didn't look
Though it may seem to you
Your war is not with me
Chorus
It's your fantasy
Not me
You have the wrong girl
I was just passing by
Verse
It all became clear
You never knew me
It was your mind
Hoping to be found
Sorry for your loss
Bridge
Your pain
Is lost in life
I hope you get better for everyone
Chorus
It's your fantasy
Not me
You have the wrong girl
I was just passing by
###
You Have the Wrong Girl
By 'Lori Jean' Finnila
Humble turns to confusion
Sweet smiles become allusions
Chorus
It's your fantasy
Not me
You have the wrong girl
I was just passing by
Verse
When you noticed
I didn't look
Though it may seem to you
Your war is not with me
Chorus
It's your fantasy
Not me
You have the wrong girl
I was just passing by
Verse
It all became clear
You never knew me
It was your mind
Hoping to be found
Sorry for your loss
Bridge
Your pain
Is lost in life
I hope you get better for everyone
Chorus
It's your fantasy
Not me
You have the wrong girl
I was just passing by
###
Friday, November 24, 2017
Getting On Little Doggy #lorijean #pain #nervedamage
Those who are beaten with a strong brain will just get right back on there again, get on again little doggy.
Another barrier to break is natural treatment for those who have been beaten that will get right back up on that horse, so to speak. Traditional medicines block us from doing this dragging our perspectives down. I've been inquiring into this as seven years going by and the physical discomforts of mine seeping in as my brain gets stronger to it. Insurance doesn't want to cover it and doctors feel uncomfortable with cannabis, which is a recent method of medical that I've been researching, effective done with care. Why if there's so many victims out there haven't other alternative methods been recognized and practiced and covered?
Photo courtesy Dr. Nabil Ebraheim
Another barrier to break is natural treatment for those who have been beaten that will get right back up on that horse, so to speak. Traditional medicines block us from doing this dragging our perspectives down. I've been inquiring into this as seven years going by and the physical discomforts of mine seeping in as my brain gets stronger to it. Insurance doesn't want to cover it and doctors feel uncomfortable with cannabis, which is a recent method of medical that I've been researching, effective done with care. Why if there's so many victims out there haven't other alternative methods been recognized and practiced and covered?
Photo courtesy Dr. Nabil Ebraheim
Tuesday, November 14, 2017
Having Fun with This One!!! Redo of "How's I Such a Fool" #lorijean #country
Did this one over and combined the two songs for a BLAST of one using "Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine" and "How's I Such a Fool!"
Have fun listening to it! It's just a draft and not in time exactly of course because I don't have an interface right now. Get the lyrics!!!
Photo courtesy College Humor
Have fun listening to it! It's just a draft and not in time exactly of course because I don't have an interface right now. Get the lyrics!!!
Photo courtesy College Humor
Friday, November 10, 2017
Updated drafts “How's I Such a Fool” and “Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine” #lorijean #songs #updates
Lyrics Below
I've been working on my next releases.
I still have “You Didn't Even Want Our Baby” album in progress.
Please don't think I'm forgetting about that. As a matter of fact,
“How's I Such a Fool” is one of the songs on the album, and one
of my favorites. I ended up picking this one to work on next as well
as the single Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine, which was
inspired by Five for Fighting's “She's My Girl,” because I found
“My Best Country Song” didn't have strong enough lyrics. I really
feel that this is imperative in a song. Even if the music is good, I
think great lyrics are very much needed. The order, the story, and
the way you want the audience to perceive it. I hope you like the
updates. I will be getting a focus rite for my computer. It sounds a
bit poopy now, but I know your used to my style and can appreciate my
work at any stage. Thanks!!! Mwah!!! Love ya!!
P.S. Also, I have a BEAUTIFUL jade
green gown for my red carpet award celebration in April. Wish I could
see you there. It goes great with my eyes and shows my bust nice.
It's a bit long but if I wear slightly uncomfortable heels that have
boot effect and a bigger heel and braids I'll make the PART for “Is
It the Time!!!” Haven't figured out what I'll do with my purse of
casual outfit or dress bag before the celebration. I'm hoping to get
a hotel room to store it all. Not sure what time the show will start
for this. I was going to fly in right before. Maybe I'll bring a
small purse and fly in my gown – buy a cheap pair of pants and
shirt afterwards??!!!
Also, check out my “Ashes on My Cup”
video if you haven't already seen it.
How's I Such a Fool
by Lori Jean Finnila
Verse
That first night in the
field
Under the moonlight
Van Morrison was playing our
song
Chorus
How's I such a fool
When you crashed me to the
ground
With the words I love you
still in my head
While I was being thrown
Verse
But then your bike crashed
me to the ground
it started out on our first
date
on a horse
the bike man at the store
saw me panting as you gave
me a push to get back on for
more
Chorus
Verse
The second time around
It came from a car
Though I took the spin with
my neck
You took the money for
whiplash
Bridge
You fell on your knees to me
as I was put upon a thrown
The ring you gave me
shown through the entire
night
Chorus
doo doo da doo da doo da
repeat
doo doo da doo da doo da
Under the Moonlight
with a Bottle of Wine
by Lori Jean Finila
Verse
You've
found your wet dreams
when
you think of me
You
call me on the phone
remembering
our song
the one
we never had
Chorus
I was
told to love Valentino
Live
like Cinderella
Under
the moonlight
with a
bottle of wine
Verse
You
fell on your knees to me
As I
was put upon a thrown to all beings
The
ring you gave me
shown
through the entire night
Bridge
Drifting
lovely like a fall
I made
the completion
to it
all
You
say,
“Flower
still,
be
still inside of me,
under
the sheets,
in the
chair,
cornered
everywhere.”
Six
lines shaped like church organ pipes
shine
shadows on my breasts at night
The
dips point to the corners in me
where
you shine most gently
Chorus
I was
told to love Valentino
Live
like Cinderella
Under
the moonlight
with a
bottle of wine
Friday, November 3, 2017
New Version of Song "Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine" by 'Lori Jean' Finnila and a New Poem
Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine
Those Who Wait
by 'Lori Jean' Finnila
Comfort
collects with the touch of glass
glistening
isn't just for one but for all
sparkles
dance and bring gesture
For
it is all known to substance
Substance
in the air is direction
to
the following of a gesture
that
is life to some
but
not all, to some despair
Despair
is in the hearts of the unknown
one's
who can't understand what is happening
or
what is there to begin with
A
grace is a place that is not owned
An
enchantment is a pleasure
that
is to all
One
takes pleasures originally
It
all comes to those who wait.
Courtesy Novel Matters
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